lunes, 11 de julio de 2011

important person

This important person who I want to talk about is my dad he is definitely an important person in our family from the moment he was born in the year of 1972 his name is Sergio Ismael Arreola Illesacas he has a lot to give when he was growing up he was particular boy who like to play jokes and be happy, my father has a twin that looks exactly just like him in the age they were growing up my father were getting more responsible and responsible with the things in the school he is a person that being applied to the studies, he has a lot to give one day he was at his home in zone 2 when then it appears my mom the stranger who my dad falls in love that women with curly hair a figure that in their times were awesome the beauty queen of Quetzaltenango, and also my mom falls in love with my dad she saw in the door of his house just watching how everything was going, suddenly they start to keep seeing each other until they two married at the age of 19, they were really young that’s is when my dad starts to take the responsibility that he knows to can keep a family so he starts working on Galletas Gama he was there for like 6 years the a better opportunity appears one of the chief of another food industry Kerns,saw how hard my dad was working strenuously saw that it was a person with potential to work that he is a responsible person take cares of the things has the gift of command and that he can prosper more and earn more money to hold the family he is such a lovely father he scarifies for us giving the things that we want because he loves us and want the best for us we are three sons that he had with that women that he had met in zone 2,after that  that with hard work and dedication to achieve their desired goals as they were set up to earn more money so he can buy whatever he likes, , he is a very dedicated person with the things he does, is very responsible, if he says I know I can achieve that goal i would do it until a finished he graduated from the university of Landivar, now the physical form of my dad ohh i would say it is so funny he has a beer stomach like the old man with that hilarious, he has brown eyes he is like 1.72 of high, he is getting hair less but he still has, he is very careful with the hygiene, he starts these year running through the streets so he can be in physical fitness, i think he enjoys being with us. he is like a rude guy he when he was little his dad carries him to the Aurora so he can starts riding horses that is one of his favorite hobby’s. he likes to go out with the family so we can know another places he is a very intelligent person he don’t know it everything because no one knows everything he is not a perfect dad he is a little bit angry and scolds us only when needed for Our installment buying’s own good. talking about his relationship with other people he is a very social person that likes to meet new people and be friends he has friends from his childhood that stills are in meetings where the family’s get together so the friends can get together sometimes he is an spontaneous person, he likes to enjoy life’s and be happy he is a very religious person he likes to go to the church all Sundays, the way he dress up is like a  confortable way, he uses formal dresses when he want to look good when we are going out, he is not a excellent dad he can be wrong some times because to err is human The truth is that he has the attitude to be an important person in my life and in my heart i love him very much he is an important person.

1 comentario:

  1. Sergio:

    Break your writing up into smaller paragraphs. it is very difficult to read in one, big chunk.

    Second, try to be more creative with your title! Who is this person? Let me in on the secret with just the title! Also, Make sure to really edit your entry before posting it. You're missing periods, commas, etc. that you would probably catch had you read your writing again.

    Overall, you include really great details about your father and mother. I can picture them and their story pretty clearly.

    Next time, try starting by setting the scene the moment they met, then tell me what he looks like.

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